spiders poem by Jonathan
Spiders are so creepy Spiders are so black I would not like spiders crawling up my back , spiders like to sleep when I am in the sun and when the moon is shining bright thats when they have fun, spiders have eight fury legs and lay a lot of tiny eggs. I would like a spider as a pet so he can be my buddy I would take him on my bike with me so we can both get muddy!
we like your poem because you had good rhyming.
ReplyDeletenext time try to set out your poem differently in .
Jack C and Ben
Good rhymes Jonnie they were very catchy
ReplyDeletemake the letters bigger so it is readable
by jordan