At summer I see people at the beach sunbathing and building massive sandcastles.
At summer I feel soft sand under my feet and the sun beaming down onto the sunblock on my back.
At summer I smell the salty sea water and barbecues sizzling everywhere.
At summer I hear kids screaming at the beach and the big, big waves crashing against rocks.
At summer I taste cold water going down my throght with freezing icecream and yummy iceblocks
By Jordan
Great poem we liked all of the strong adjectives and liked your strong verbs try and add a smilie next time
ReplyDeleteFrom MAX and Mason
You really made me feel like I was at the beach
ReplyDeleteYou could add a ending to sum it up
By George
great senses,verbs and adjectives next time try using some rhyming
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