Splish, splash, splosh went the boat as we went bashing through the cold water. I could feel the wind flow through my hair, "ow" yelled Michael because the boat took a bump and Michael was in a very uncomfortable spot, very soon we drove off back to the dock and hopped off. It was very fun.
Good adjectives it paints a good picture in my head
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