Wednesday, October 30, 2013

ANGER BY JOSH MCGREGOR

ANGER

Anger looks like the colour red and people gritting their teeth.

Anger smells like rotten eggs and smelly socks.

Anger sounds like people saying bad words.

Anger feels like getting punched in the face.

Anger tastes like blood swirling around in  my mouth



Fear

                             Fear is dark grey, black and navy
 You can see people cowering in their homes and houses staring at you with hatred.
You can hear high pitched screams and animals growling in the distance.
You can smell sad salty tears and smoke pouring out of windows and doors.
You can see a tornado of fear whistling through the air.
You can taste mouldy old fruit and stale dry biscuits.
Fear is terrible!


Josh C

SUMMMER

Summer looks like sharks taking down boats.
Summer feels like the sun burning your skin.
summer sounds like creaks running and beach balls being hit.
Summer tastes like delicious hamburgers.
summer smells like dad burning more food.
I like Summer especially when i go camping.

cory

Popcorn

The popcorn sounds like a crunch of a twig
The popcorn feels like crocked stones
Popcorn smells like a river of butter
Popcorn tastes like little butter lumps
Popcorn looks like a tornado of kernels.

By Jordie

ANGER

ANGER

Anger feels like a bullet through your head

You can see the red and black fighting in the dark

You can hear angry shouts bellowing in the darkness

You can taste blood floating in your mouth

Anger smells like hot sweaty bodies


BY MAX WOLF 



Popcorn

Popcorn

popcorn looks like an overflowing 
volcano.
Popcorn sounds like people saying
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
popcorn tastes warm and flavourless.
Popcorn smells like being in a movie theatre.
Popcorn feels like a warm and bumpy sun

cory

Summer senses

When its summer i can smell steam of the smokey barbecue.
I can taste that greasy oil off my salty chips.
I can see kids swishing and splashing water at there soaking parents.
I can hear the crunching and mixing of the fruity drinks.
I can touch the burning rocks with the souls of my feet.      
                              By Ruby.



Braveness

Braveness feels like all your fears running away

Braveness sounds like the wind telling you what to do to make life stronger

Braveness tastes like an adventure on a safari trip

Braveness looks like the world glowing and spinning around you

Without braveness, life would be cold, threatning and scary
By OSSY OSSY OSSY!!! Oscar

Happiness

Happiness is a bright yellow sun shining down on you
following your path

Happiness smells like the sweet scents of the flowers
hanging around you

Happiness sounds like the bees buzzing
in colourful medows of flowers

Happiness is the taste of sweet yellow pineapple

By Monique


Sadness

Sadness is a big thunder storm

You can hear roaring and loud people

Sadness is like a dark rainy cloud drizzling over me
Sadness is a cold place
Sometimes you can see revolting people smoking
Sadness is like a big black sea hovering over top of me
You can smell black smoke from the mossy chimneys

BY  ELLA

Anger poem

When I am angry I see volcanos erupting and very dark colours.
When I am angry I feel like Im locked in a dungeon with tornados surrounding me.
When I am angry I taste fire burning inside my mouth.
When I am angry I hear thunder and lightning with rain.
When I am angry I smell dead rats and smoke from burnt houses.
Anger is terrible.

By Jordan

ANGER©

Anger fills up your insides, 
You feel like you want to smash a 
window.
Anger turns you into a killer cat,
You see the colour red all the 
time.
You spread out your 
claws.
Ready to targrt your prey.
You taste bright red strawberries.
You feel the fire cracking inside you. 
You try to put water on the 
           FLAMES
But they are to high.
  
by Gosha

frustration

 
                                                                  Frustration
                                     Frustration feels like like a volcano ready to burst.                  
                                    Frustration smells like smoke coming from my ears.
                                                    Frustration looks very shaky.
                             Frustration sounds like steam rapidly coming out from a kettle.
                                                  Frustration tastes dry and awful.
                                                                  ka-boom
                                                               



                                                                                                         



                             By Jack C

ANGER

           Anger is bright red.

             I can see steam coming out of my ears.

              I can feel hatred flowing through my body.

          Anger tastes like an un-ripe banana.

         Anger can hurt people.


      By Christian
            

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

the apocalypse

The apocalypse
Im running around with the ray gun and a revolver the floor boards of the run down zombie infested house creaked cracked and moulded away under my feet its tall and towers over you with a big metal rusted fence a rotted stone path runs up to the front door and says 21 jump street inside the wind is blowing all over the place as I reach the top floor I see 2 zombies with to shots of my revolver they die I see holes in the roof from the shattered roof tiles the stench of the rotted zombie flesh fills the air as I wait for more zombies.


BY MAX WOLF    
The wind brushed past my face as I creeped slowly across the raty old bridge witch lead to a mossy green hill. Splash I fell into the freezing cold water. As I quickly swam to shore, something bit my toe. A shiver of fear ran down my spine!!!!!!
BY ELLA!!!!!!

JONNIE ENGLISH REBORN 2

As Jonnie jumped out of the exploding building and pulled the strap for his inflatable kayak.  Splash ,he could hear hear water rushing and the mountain top building burning up into flames. beep beep Jonnie looked at his watch Rachel said "well done jonnie you successfully  blew up the bad guys fortress.

by Cory 

Summer senses Poem

Summer tastes like ice cream melting in my mouth.
I can fell the sand when my feet sink in.
I can hear the bees buzzing around the flowers.
I can see the sun shining apon me.
I can smell the sausages sizzling in the barbie


By  Christian

spiders poem by Jonathan

 Spiders are so creepy Spiders are so black I would not like spiders crawling up my back , spiders like to sleep when I am in      the sun and when the moon is shining bright thats when they have fun, spiders have eight fury legs and lay a lot of tiny eggs. I would like a spider as a pet so he can be my buddy I would take him on my bike with me so we can both get muddy!

Summer


At summer I see people at the beach sunbathing and building massive sandcastles.
At summer I feel soft sand under my feet and the sun beaming down onto the sunblock on my back.
At summer I smell the salty sea water and barbecues sizzling everywhere.
At summer I hear kids screaming at the beach and the big, big waves crashing against rocks.
At summer I taste cold water going down my throght with freezing icecream and yummy iceblocks
By Jordan

The boat ride

Splish, splash, splosh went the boat as we went bashing through the cold water. I could feel the wind flow through my hair, "ow" yelled Michael because the boat took a bump and Michael was in a very uncomfortable spot, very soon we drove off back to the dock and hopped off. It was very fun.

Fluffy Kitten




Fluffy kitten, Fluffy kitten
playing outside
leap as high as the big, blue sky

Fluffy kitten, Fluffy kitten
playing with her ball
bat it as high as our dining room table

Fluffy kitten, Fluffy kitten
eating from her bowl
leaving crumbs big as a pebble

Fluffy kitten, Fluffy kitten
napping on her bed
purring as she sleeps on her pink fluffy bed

By Monique 


Tuesday, October 22, 2013

New Publishing Blog

Hi Room One

This is our new publishing blog.  I hope you enjoy publishing your fantastic writing on here and commenting on each others masterpieces!

Miss H