The popcorn sounds like a crunch of a twig
The popcorn feels like crocked stones
Popcorn smells like a river of butter
Popcorn tastes like little butter lumps
Popcorn looks like a tornado of kernels.
By Jordie
The popcorn feels like crocked stones
Popcorn smells like a river of butter
Popcorn tastes like little butter lumps
Popcorn looks like a tornado of kernels.
By Jordie
Great senses Jordie they help paint a picture in the readers mind!
ReplyDeleteMaybe include a metaphor at the end to finish off the poem?
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