Wednesday, October 30, 2013

ANGER©

Anger fills up your insides, 
You feel like you want to smash a 
window.
Anger turns you into a killer cat,
You see the colour red all the 
time.
You spread out your 
claws.
Ready to targrt your prey.
You taste bright red strawberries.
You feel the fire cracking inside you. 
You try to put water on the 
           FLAMES
But they are to high.
  
by Gosha

2 comments:

  1. We can see the fire burning right now
    try not to use the word you too many times
    by caitlynn and ruth

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  2. I love the features including "claws and cat" because you described them in the most truly inspiring way. Make sure you double check your punctuation! YO ITS OSSY

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