Wednesday, October 30, 2013

SUMMMER

Summer looks like sharks taking down boats.
Summer feels like the sun burning your skin.
summer sounds like creaks running and beach balls being hit.
Summer tastes like delicious hamburgers.
summer smells like dad burning more food.
I like Summer especially when i go camping.

cory

2 comments:

  1. summer sounds like creaks running and beach balls being hit.

    By George

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  2. Great use of similes Cory you can picture it in your head. Try to include a personification

    Josh C & Daniel

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