ANGER
Anger feels like a bullet through your head
You can see the red and black fighting in the dark
You can hear angry shouts bellowing in the darkness
You can taste blood floating in your mouth
Anger smells like hot sweaty bodies
BY MAX WOLF
Great sences MAX
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we like your senses and similes because it paints a picture in our mind
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ReplyDeleteGreat job using the senses you included a good simile and creative features. Try to include a metaphor next time Josh C and Daniel
Nice work max you have managed to add strong verbs, the 5 sences and a simile. Well done you have done very well and i can paint a picture a picture in my mind of it and it is definately full of anger. From Harry
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